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I slowly dip my toes
And test the flowing water,
Little did I know
My heart was up for slaughter.

Rushing in,
It coats my skin,
I feel the pressure on my chest.
A hug to take the life from me,
Now I know it's for the best.

Come through my mouth
And wash my soul
No one ever has to know.
A longing that I feel so strong,
A longing that should feel so wrong.
One I wrote a while ago and forgot to post :)
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th3writer Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Woah this is really good! Keep it up :)
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank-you :)
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th3writer Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
you're welcome!
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Writer
It's brilliant! :) :heart:
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much and for the fave :)
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Professional Writer
You're welcome :) And I hope you don't mind me saying but I think your poetry is just getting better and better all the time, never give up writing! :) :heart:
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't mind you saying at all! thank you!
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!!
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank-you :)
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Sneekygreenman Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Another awesome poem :D keep this level of work up over the summer and you'll be brilliant!
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