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So you're telling me
that flowers grow
after they have died?

Well honey, I'd
believe you, but
in the past you've lied.

what about that
awful night?
The trees were pining for your name.

You chopped them down.
What a dick.
You think that glue can fix their pain.
URGH a guy I used to like really pisses me off now....
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Sy-Core Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
Very nice poem :)
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank-you :) and for the fave :)
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Sy-Core Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
Your welcome :)
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Markuskus555 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll just go kill myself then K?
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
D: are you taking the mick mark...
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Markuskus555 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure anymore, I'm confused by life.
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:(
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starell Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
really like the metaphors! Great poem!
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TwoLeftSocks Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thankyou very much :)
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starell Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
you are most welcome!
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